So, I’m finally at the point where I feel happy with the Cuckoo Juice revisions. I can finally put this aside and work on other projects. Although, I am open to small general changes to the peices, this general feel is what I’m sticking with.
There is only so much you can do with product shots that all have the same angel. Looking at the ads all at once makes this very noticable too. I’m still not totally happy with the copy text, but I don’t know. I guess it will do for now.
These are still concepts. I'm still working on the copy text and a catchy slogan I plan on using for all my ads and web project. But copy text is hard, so if anyone has any good ideas that would be much appreciated! But anyways, Looking at the company "Cuckoo Juice Co." I decided I wanted to come up with some very colorful and energetic ads. Most company's that use juices that are fruity and high in sugar use these sort of high bright designs. So thats what I was going for. Still cleaning up a few other things in these ads but this is the general concept I'm stretching for. I may try some other things for the other two ads I plan on re-comping. Wings is also a theme I was trying to implement, seeing as I got the name "Cuckoo" from the bird : ]
This project has a lot of things I want to change. Especially since we are going to be using it now for our website. My goal for this ad is to turn it into a more interesting piece that is a lot more eye catchy. Also I would like to come up with some better copy text and just a more professional feel.
Thats about it. I plan on doing it with all 3 of my ads.
For my first project I want to use my Mercy Corp book. The changes I want to make are pretty simple and I got most of the ideas from the voice thread. Pretty much, I would want to make the red mercy corp bar go more with the red stripe at the bottom. Also, I'm getting rid of the bleed from the title and shrinking it down a bit. I like that its aggressive but, I think its a little too much right now.
Any more thoughts would be cool.
Still need that message... this feels pretty psychedelic to me, which is okay...maybe go with something along the lines of... read more
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